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I dove into the waters
Before it was Spring.
I was envisioning the summer
But it was all in my head.

As my feet touch the ocean,
It felt so right.
I still pictured the summer
And the sun beaming bright.

My legs felt the sea.
I was unable to breath.
But I thought it was good,
And everything was at it should.

Once my waist touched the waters,
A sudden shock.
Maybe what should be,
is actually not…

I trusted my first impressions,
But on my face you could see the expression;
I was too scared to care,
I hadn’t learned a lesson.

I kept falling into the sea’s wrath.
I knew now I couldn’t go back.
I was surly falling into the sea for good,
My icy flesh was the only one that understood.

It wasn’t yet spring.
I jumped in too soon,
And realized too late,
But I put my trust in my moon.

The moon will share the sky,
And let the sun take it’s course,
I will wait here shivering,
Hoping to feel the warmth.

Only soon will the water heat.
And my flesh will unfreeze.
The sun will melt the icy heart
And give love back to me.

And if not…
I will become the sun.
I will melt my own heart,
And all will be undone.

I can let the moon have his time,
And every night when he rise,
I will freeze below the water
Waiting for the moon to give me mine.

Will I ever climb out from below this liquid?
For now I cannot know.
So i will follow the cycle,
And for now I’ll stay below.
When The Sun Freezes
A metaphorical poem about a relationship.
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Janine
Artist | Student | Photography
United States
I'm 18, have 25 hermit crabs, love music and photography.

Also in 2011 I completed a 365 project which i took a photo everyday for a year. So if some pictures are titled with "Day #" then they were apart of my project.

www.flickr.com/photos/janinelson06
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arnarn-stinkfist Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
some intresting pictures you got here mam..Meow :3 Nod :) (Smile) 
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janinelson Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014  Student Photographer
why, thank you :D
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Thepandagamer Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow, your photographs are stunning! Can't wait to see more
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janinelson Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Photographer
thank you! your photostream's really good too!
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PlanetSpunk Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the favorite! :aww:
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EyesRadioLies Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Hey thank you for the Watch and many favs. Much appreciated!!
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xSinFayx Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome to the deviantART!!!:)
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janinelson Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Photographer
thanks. you too!
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xSinFayx Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank u:)
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sth22art Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012
thanx a lot for the watch
...much appreciated :)
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